@PuppyBorkbutaccountgotwiped We could compromise and put all the nostalgia/memories stuff into a later part of the document maybe? I just think it's a lot being immediately loaded onto the reader. Amazing work on the writing btw, that short story definitely evokes those feelings.
In my opinion the major part of the level should just follow a non-biased, descriptive part, and eventually all the nostalgia thing could be at the end of the page