I just checked out the beasts and...
Alright, im going to list the things I don't like about this thing ("beasts"):
1: Weakness. some "beasts" have multiple weaknesses so it should be called Weaknesses
2: Xonemon. probably the only good name in this.
3: has 120 Iq but slips easily on water. Come on, IT'S LITERALLY IS A STRONG CANINE WITH 5 LEGS AND A TAIL, which you would think would literally help it balance on water.
4: a weakness would be like is afraid of high/low pitch sounds or something instead of slips on water easily. this is either inspired by or a ripoff of the hound.
5: The visualization. not sure what to say about this one.
6: The Picture doesn't even have the red eyes as the description said.
7: why would It need 200 Iq? it doesn't seem to make complex actions, just follow people around and reduce their sanity.
8: "The vizualization is an less-detailed-human-shadow figure with red eyes. It cannot psychically hurt you, but it decreases your sanity drastically and slowly leads you to some death." I mean, it makes sense atleast.
9: "Flashlight makes them die". I'm not sure what to say about this. perhaps it might work?
10: The Murderer. No words
11: "Male, 7ft tall humanoid with mask and ripped clothling, which wields a knife. It speaks random letters, so it's impossible to communicate with this thing. It has normal human's skin exept it has blood on it. Attempting to take off it's mask will result in an instant death. He will try to hunt and kill you." I feel like it should be the mask that's the entity. other than that I guess it's decently wrote.
12: "This beast is very heavy, which means its slow too." Could be better.
This is how I feel about the Beasts section of this.