I would say the idea is good and it's going in the right idea, but some grammar and general ideas need to be fixed. Overall 6/10, but with improvement could be a banger of a level. Lmk if you want help editing in the future.
Well first, maybe give the level a more defined structure. Just saying it is a house is a little too vague. Is it only the interior of a house, or is it a whole property with a yard? Also I can help with spelling and grammar if you want.