@E6621275 Any ideas for improvement?
Well, i looked at the stuff closer, and i think we need a more detailed explanation of the entity or some exploration logs
@E6621275 Sounds good, I will need to work around it a little as the idea is that this is basically supposed to be a prison for something or someone horrible, I just need to find a way to justify a log (recovered tapes by some anomalous manner) as the idea is that this is where the worst of the worst go to die.
Oh... i know that the idea of the prison for some person, as i translated the binary. but thats a good point. maybe do some roleplaying?
Like in roleplay posts or in the actual doc?
Roleplay posts Xd
Like someone should explore it but idk your ideas
Hmmm... well... it's not bad, and the concept is pretty interesting. With some more work on cleaning the page, also maybe adding an image to illustrate the description, this could be an interesting page!
@CrimsonFenrir7 WHOA I WAS NOT EXPECTING YOU TO REPLY TO THIS, your feedback means a lot, I am likely going to take some time in a bit (in 4-5 hours after taking a break) to clean this page up, I also have been looking into the image thing and will likely throw together my own image (using some already existing photos of NYC and my photoshop certification skills) thank you for the feedback!
Am I really that infamous? XD
Anyway, that sounds like a good plan, and good luck on that! Feel free to tag me when you're done updating the page, so I can see how it's going.
@CrimsonFenrir7 Got a image for it I am really gonna be doing a lot of polishing throughout the night!
What do you think?