How's everybody doing? I'm a new user on the database, interested in The Backrooms so I attempted to write my own page. Link if you're interested (not sure what category to post this in) : https://backrooms.fandom.com/wiki/Fretmen
Hello! You were correct in posting this in the Writing Critique thread. I took a quick look at your page. Sorry that I can't do a full critique right now, but I just wanted to say that your page was a little difficult to read visually. Perhaps breaking up the paragraphs could help?
If you want an actual crit, feel free to drop your level link off in my message wall, and I'll give you a crit eventually.
Hmmm, thanks for the feedback! I did think of splitting paragraphs but because i had so many clumped ideas at once the paragraphs' writing was also clumped.
At times like that, making use of subheaders are always a plus.
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Subheaders help not only make the page look more tidy and easier to read, but allows the writer to notice which ideas are underdeveloped, since the description length in the subheaders may be short.