Hello, I've made my first contributing to the backrooms community on fandom by writing/creating a level https://backrooms.fandom.com/wiki/Level_2753
Critique on the level would be appreciated. I was unable to put an image.
Imma be honest “the only reason the people were safe is because there is an effect causing specifically ONLY living people not to die from the heat.” sounds stupid. Better explanations include
-Only THAT ROOM was heated
-nobody was in the level at the time
-people were in the level but did die
Other than that it sounds pretty good.
Thanks for the criticism! I Will make notes of what I can do better in my writing.
What do you think?