Rate my Levels (More coming soon.)
https://backrooms.fandom.com/wiki/Level_1181
https://backrooms.fandom.com/wiki/Level_2241
Rate my Levels (More coming soon.)
https://backrooms.fandom.com/wiki/Level_1181
https://backrooms.fandom.com/wiki/Level_2241
Hmm... Your writing is pretty good, and your levels are okay too. They seems pretty interesting, with their own unique characteristics, and I can certainly say that you're way more original than most newbies here, which is a good thing!
I say that your level is around 7/10 for me. They're decent, unique, somewhat interesting, has substantial detail, and the writing is good enough. The snowy level could be great, with more content to spice up the page. The cube level is confusing at best, but definitely unique and probably never done before. The theater is my fave level, because you could bravely include things that are pretty relevant to IRL society (heterophobia) and that alone is praiseworthy,
All of them could go up to 8/10 with just a little more work, but right now, they're already good enough and they passed my greenlighting. So yeah, good job!
Its really good! I love how you can create some of your own grammar's in the level and some add up's!
Level Frosty is good, level 1181 is... ok and level 2241 is bad
Why do you think those two levels are bad?
I don’t really understand the layout of 2241
What do you mean "Layout" its a cube floating in a ocean of Primordial ooze that. This said Ocean has floating Islands above it.
What do you think?