Hmm... Your writing is pretty good, and your levels are okay too. They seems pretty interesting, with their own unique characteristics, and I can certainly say that you're way more original than most newbies here, which is a good thing!
I say that your level is around 7/10 for me. They're decent, unique, somewhat interesting, has substantial detail, and the writing is good enough. The snowy level could be great, with more content to spice up the page. The cube level is confusing at best, but definitely unique and probably never done before. The theater is my fave level, because you could bravely include things that are pretty relevant to IRL society (heterophobia) and that alone is praiseworthy,
All of them could go up to 8/10 with just a little more work, but right now, they're already good enough and they passed my greenlighting. So yeah, good job!