I am asking people to look at my page and tell me if I should add more detail or fix grammar. The page is a WIP so it isn't finished, but I still would like writing critique.
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The amount of SPaG errors were surprisingly low! But, please work on the tone of the description.
@Starnest Ok. Were there any SPaG errors?
As I just said, there were a few. I won't be able to point them all out because it's 2 a.m. rn and I'm supposed to be focusing on my assignment.
What do you think?