There are some grammatical mistakes, i cant tell if the parent's dialogues are supposed to be grammatically incorrect.
Is there a specific reason why your mental maturity is so low in the car? Is it because youre talking to the parents? Is it because of the car itself?
What happens when you run off into the woods?
Most of the entrance levels are deleted or doesnt exist, i hope you can maybe rewrite that section.
What if you are not a male? Would the parents still address you as "son"?
Also i personally think it would be good on adding how this level affects your sanity.