Hey there!
Right now, I think the page is not bad, but not good enough either. You rely too much on roleplaying, such as using logs as your main content, even though it should be the side content. What matter is the quality of the writing itself, and the concept behind the idea.
Unfortunately, indeed, it is cringe. Sounds like yet another page related to Partygoers, Partypoopers, or whatever variations of them. Other than that, there's nothing really unique and original to make the page survive for long.
Don't get me wrong. The page is not so terrible, but it just won't pass my greenlighting.