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Any questions about my entity?

(No, he doesn’t have a page)

You walk among the yellow walls and carpets. You can’t remember how long you’ve been here. Their faces, the faces of your friends and family, have long since faded from your mind. As you walk through the strange building, you notice a glowing face, much like those you have dealt with before. You throw your flashlight, and when the creature chases it, you pull out your pistol. “Sorry, bud!” You say as you shoot the gun, “its survival of the fittest in this world!” You’ve done this multiple times, each time enjoying it more. You laugh at the corpse, and hid it just like you did the rest of your victims, INCLUDING YOUR FAMILY. You chop the creature into small chunks, and put it into a boiling pot. You then take the smoked chunks, and lift one to your mouth. You remember what life was like before you found this place. The cold concrete cell, the smooth metal bars. When you found this place, you were overjoyed to find all of the living beings in this world, knowing they were trapped in here with you.

1. I can tie myself into a knot

2. I can scan my surroundings and come up with 2 ways to kill someone(slightly disturbing)

3. I like to draw slightly disturbing monsters in my notebook

You walk through the strange, forest-like unknown level. A chill running down your spine. As you walk you hear whispers. “Run! He is near!” You decide to keep walking through the thick dark blue forest, crawling through the plants, a thorn from a bush scratches you. As you walk, you remember their faces. Your friends, your family, you’d give anything to see them again. As you continue through the forest you hear a loud growl. Ignoring the feeling in your body telling you to run away, you keep walking. You notice out of the corner of your eye that a figure in a indigo robe is stumbling through the forest. You follow the figure, being careful not to be seen, when it suddenly stops in front of a dead… thing. You’ve seen plenty of animals before but not this. It was pitch black, with faintly glowing spots on its face. To your horror, the “human” lifts a chunk of the dead creature towards its mouth. You hear its loud chewing. As you stifle a scream, the creature finally notices you. It turns around towards you and you see its hideous mangled face, it had large sharp teeth, and pitch black eyes, its skin a dull grey color. The creature says one word before running into the shadows: “Zanchorath”

(I created this, just wanted to have feedback on my writing.)

You walk through the strange, forest like unknown level. A chill running down your spine. As you walk you hear whispers. “Run! He is near!” You decide to keep walking through the thick dark blue forest, crawling through the plants, a thorn from a bush scratches you. As you walk, you remember their faces. Your friends, your family, you’d give anything to see them again. As you continue through the forest you hear a loud growl. Ignoring the feeling in your body telling you to run away, you keep walking. You notice out of the corner of your eye that a figure in a indigo robe is stumbling through the forest. You follow the figure, being careful not to be seen, when it suddenly stops in front of a dead… thing. You’ve seen plenty of animals before but not this. It was pitch black, with faintly glowing spots on its face. To your horror, the “human” lifts a chunk of the dead creature towards its mouth. You hear its loud chewing. As you stifle a scream, the creature finally notices you. It turns around towards you and you see its hideous mangled face, it had large sharp teeth, and pitch black eyes, its skin a dull grey color. The creature says one word before running into the shadows: “Zanchorath”